28 Quotes by Howard Mittelmark

Alice in Lapland. Any undue interest in or physical contact with children will set off alarms. If you do not want your reader to think he is reading about a pedophile, dandling of children on knees should be kept to a minimum by fathers, and even more so by uncles. If your character is in any way associated with organized religion, whether he is a bishop, a minister, or the kindly old church caretaker with a twinkle in his eye, he should not even pull a child from a burning building.

How she wished she were back at home with her family, strumming her banjo on the porch while Grampa Cornpone played the fiddle. Oh, the steamy bayou nights of her youth! Ma would cook up a huge pan of Creole innards, whilst Pa sat in the corner smoking his pipe of tabaccy with the hound dogs snoozing at his feet.

Historical research has the same status as all background information. The author must know it, even if it does not appear directly in the novel. Otherwise, the characters won’t seem like people, and the setting won’t seem like a place.

When well executed, description is unobtrusive and lends substance to a novel. It is the body fat of prose: too much is unhealthy, but without any, you no longer have the thing – you have its skeleton.

There was a time when a book could be sold purely because its author had been to distant climes and had returned to tell of the exotic sights he had seen. That author was Marco Polo, and the time was the thirteenth century.

The male author unthinkingly creates a world in which every single member of society is male except – hey presto! – when the protagonist feels like getting laid. Especially common in science fiction; apparently many writers assume that in the future women will die out.

Unfortunately, this is so obviously a convention of bad fiction that it might as well read, ‘Looking in the mirror, Joe saw a tall, brown-haired man, trapped in a poorly written novel.

Remember: blonde, brunette, and redhead are not personality types.

Adolf introduces Fascism to Germany, spreads war throughout Europe, murders millions in concentration camps – but he’s a strict vegetarian and loves his dog. Tossing in a touching scene with his German shepherd Blondie and a dish of lentils won’t make Hitler’s character ‘balanced.’ Hitler’s character isn’t balanced.